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#4
They look great to me. Mind the hook placement though, iirc Leland places his hook bend at the rear of the tailing materials to avoid short strikes.
 
#5
They look great to me. Mind the hook placement though, iirc Leland places his hook bend at the rear of the tailing materials to avoid short strikes.
Thank you for the advice, I checked the pink popper that Leland tied and the hook is back a bit further then mine. The interesting thing is that only one of the fly's in the photo is mine. The other is one I bought from Leland (tied by someone else for the shop) last week so that I had a model to work with.
cheers