There's several really great fly tying Forums out there, the typically tyer is waaaaay beyond my level. For a great series of video 'step by steps' this series out of the UK is one of the best: http://www.youtube.com/user/DavieMcPhail
Nice foil and finish! I used to tie up some very nice striper poppers, but I never got the depth you're showing there. I actually feel like I'm seeing translucence through mucous! Gorgeous!