Nice! Here is some good criticism: 1) shape the body much more carrot like. Taper the chenille which would be fat at the eye and thin at the tail. 2) use less tail and make sure to keep it on top of the hook shank. Also make them a little shorter, just to keep from getting short strikes which is all so common with SRC's. 3) only use 2/3rds of the shank for the body so there will be enough to hook properly. Otherwise, nice work. Did you whip finish by hand?