The fly on the right sucks - good idea, bad follow through. Need to recyle the hook and try again.
The fly on the left worked great. Conditions were horrible when I went out to the sky. Vis was about 6 inches in the main river. I fished the mouth of a small side channel where vis was closer to 12-18 inches - still milky white, but fishable. Didn't take long to hook into chum who just slammed this thing.