Those will fish! Keep at it, play around, watch a ton of YouTube videos and go thru the SBS section of our board here.Sorry for the bad image quality (and bad fly quality) but I will really appreciate any suggestions
The first smallie flies I tied were rough versions of yours; they caught fish. Keep at it; practice may never make perfect, but it makes better.View attachment 165258 Again, sorry about the quality. This is another version of me messing around. Just wire, thread, and a few strands of peacock herl. Seems like it could get some trout in the right circumstances but at the moment I’m just neatening up my ties more than anything
As Jim states, your flies will catch fish.As my Dad told me early-on: "There are flies that catch fish and flies that catch fishermen. Those will catch fish. In time, you will be able to tie the other kind so don't even worry about that now." Those shown WILL catch fish.